Elevator Pitch No. 2

17A- ELEVATOR PITCH NO. 2

Reflection of Feedback: Based on the feedback given, I learned that the information is important and it helps the audience know what I'm trying to accomplish.

What I changed, based of feedback: I will definitely tried to add more information. I explained more of what program is trying to do and the possible affects it could have in the society. There wasn't much I changed for my pitch but I'll achieve for better.

Comments

  1. ConnorFordMarch 18, 2019 at 5:04 PM

    Hey Gerielle,
    Awesome elevator pitch. The only main thing that I would comment on it, would be that it would be even better to include a personal story about why you are passionate about this product and as well as mentioning why you are starting this project also. Otherwise awesome job! Hope this helps!

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